America has Paradise in the palm of its hand but throws it away on these profiteering military adventures.
In this respect it is germane but from the standpoint only of the book the question is whether any focus on it is worthwhile.
As it sits right now, this is musical Paradise. Everything else sucks gigantic jagged boulders but that part is cool. The point is final when I deliver "The Paradise Song" ... but ... does the story drag on beyond that.
Resolve America has ludicrous foreign policy ... waste of time.
Resolve lots of American resources are flushed down the toilet ... waste of time.
Resolve who did it ... waste of time.
Review what it could be ... possible but huge risk of Disneyizing things. It would be just so groovy if we had safe, fast ways to get around that didn't stink and kill people. Waste of time.
Must review further but any aspect of national found or lost Paradise is just a huge stinky fish. As of just now I don't see a fit. It's pretty fucked-up that people think I'm shit for a position of not wanting to kill people so that affects my Paradise but it doesn't much affect the music. That's too thin to be worth mention either.
It may not seem it but everything wraps together ... or I do another lap around the track until it does match up.
The Biggest Unresolved Story in "Abandoning Paradise" seems obvious to me as what happened with Cat. It tells of a huge love but there is no apparent dynamic. However, that will be resolved in "The Paradise Song" as it's tragic. If it's told right it will be Romeo and Juliet as this is as star-crossed as something can ever get. The balance is that neither of us have any interest in any great personal revelation as this isn't People magazine. On balance with that is this is not the first relationship of my life and any tale of love must be sensitive to that fact. That's not simply logic as it would be grossly offensive if it did not have that.
In this respect it is germane but from the standpoint only of the book the question is whether any focus on it is worthwhile.
As it sits right now, this is musical Paradise. Everything else sucks gigantic jagged boulders but that part is cool. The point is final when I deliver "The Paradise Song" ... but ... does the story drag on beyond that.
Resolve America has ludicrous foreign policy ... waste of time.
Resolve lots of American resources are flushed down the toilet ... waste of time.
Resolve who did it ... waste of time.
Review what it could be ... possible but huge risk of Disneyizing things. It would be just so groovy if we had safe, fast ways to get around that didn't stink and kill people. Waste of time.
Must review further but any aspect of national found or lost Paradise is just a huge stinky fish. As of just now I don't see a fit. It's pretty fucked-up that people think I'm shit for a position of not wanting to kill people so that affects my Paradise but it doesn't much affect the music. That's too thin to be worth mention either.
It may not seem it but everything wraps together ... or I do another lap around the track until it does match up.
The Biggest Unresolved Story in "Abandoning Paradise" seems obvious to me as what happened with Cat. It tells of a huge love but there is no apparent dynamic. However, that will be resolved in "The Paradise Song" as it's tragic. If it's told right it will be Romeo and Juliet as this is as star-crossed as something can ever get. The balance is that neither of us have any interest in any great personal revelation as this isn't People magazine. On balance with that is this is not the first relationship of my life and any tale of love must be sensitive to that fact. That's not simply logic as it would be grossly offensive if it did not have that.
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