I've been going back through the earlier segments of "What Would Dogs Do" and I've been back-filling anywhere I didn't think the flow was complete. This won't have any effect on the outcome of the story as that's already written. What I'm doing is reviewing it overall for continuity.
(Ed: Yeah, yeah, when are the sexy bits coming.)
Well, that will be two more days. I have to wait for the passport. You have to wait for the porno! I said the other day that I may be the only person in the world with no porno on my computer and who has never stuck a spoon on my nose. I still haven't tried that trick with the spoon but it occurred to me there is some mild porno on the computer now but only because I wrote it.
I'm really interested to know if you think the 'porno' bit is cheap. I don't believe it is cheap as I found it a necessary way to illustrate the characters and their love, particularly after two years apart. It's rather less than porno as it would just barely qualify for an 'R' rating but it may raise some, erm, eyebrows nevertheless.
The last in the serialised version of the book is Part 28 so that will deliver The End next Monday. This has all been an experiment for me and I have no idea how many of you have even read it but I hope at least some of you have enjoyed it. Even if nothing else, it will serve as a case study for my nephew / bro, The Raven, in working out how to deal with dialog.
(Ed: Yeah, yeah, when are the sexy bits coming.)
Well, that will be two more days. I have to wait for the passport. You have to wait for the porno! I said the other day that I may be the only person in the world with no porno on my computer and who has never stuck a spoon on my nose. I still haven't tried that trick with the spoon but it occurred to me there is some mild porno on the computer now but only because I wrote it.
I'm really interested to know if you think the 'porno' bit is cheap. I don't believe it is cheap as I found it a necessary way to illustrate the characters and their love, particularly after two years apart. It's rather less than porno as it would just barely qualify for an 'R' rating but it may raise some, erm, eyebrows nevertheless.
The last in the serialised version of the book is Part 28 so that will deliver The End next Monday. This has all been an experiment for me and I have no idea how many of you have even read it but I hope at least some of you have enjoyed it. Even if nothing else, it will serve as a case study for my nephew / bro, The Raven, in working out how to deal with dialog.
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